Homework - January 26th

1) A workshop draft shouldn't necessarily have really good structure and good grammar. It should be more a mix of ideas in a general essay form. The main points and details should be there. The purpose is to put your ideas on paper and be able to have it critiqued for a better paper in the end. The audience should be whoever you are writing the final paper for, as well as the people in your workshop group. The purpose and audience for the workshop draft is different because it is more geared toward your peers as far as the audience goes. Also, the workshop draft, like I said before, is just a general essay form of all the information. The final draft should be geared toward a specific audience, not including your workshop group (unless that is the point of the essay). It should have all the important information, main points and details, in proper form, grammar, and structure.
2) If I was in a workshop group with the person who wrote Essay R, I would help him out with his paper by critiquing the spelling and grammar mistakes. Also, I would tell him that he should organize his information in a more "flowing" way so it will be easier to read and so it will make a lot more sense.